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Broken Halo
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:09:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I respond to your voice in my head..
succumb to it's will,
and put pen to paper.
To ignore is not an option...
(lest the miserable battle remains)
Once quiet nights are drowned
in loud music
and the sound of keystrokes
as the night falls..
slain by the sun
and the understanding
I pray for dies.
I lost my pen..
drowned my demons in alcohol
and threw away my halo
as I continued through the empty night.
Don't imply what I already know-
I spend hours trying to forget
as my cries for you
traverse each night
with hollow echoes...
while my broken halo aluminates
memories of us
M.O.H.
Copyright ©
Man_On_High
... [
2005-05-15 22:09:34]
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Re: Broken Halo
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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Very touching write.
Painfull yet a masterpeice as u have written it like a professional artist of the written word.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Broken Halo
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:56:46 PM AEST
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A painful and sad write. I can feel ur pain and sadness through ur words. May ur heart heal with time my friend. A master piece written from one's heart who's been broken. keep up the great work.
*hugs*
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Re: Broken Halo
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:17:05 AM AEST
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Poignant desolation mixed with futile hope? This is written so well. You write with a quill of gold.
Rita |
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Re: Broken Halo
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:03:12 AM AEST
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wow..
Thank you!
I'm blessed to have such an outlet
thx my friend..
M.O.H. |
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Re: Broken Halo
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by Mangs on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:48:17 AM AEST
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| Thisis a piece of art.....amazingly penned.. |
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Re: Broken Halo
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:35:43 AM AEST
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Magnificent. Brought tears forth from my eyes.
Amazing write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Broken Halo
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:36:47 PM AEST
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It takes much strength to muster the emotion and the wits
to extract from the heart a rite of passage ..
Your bravery to, not only face an emotion, but to write it down
with such an adacious clarity astounds me. Again and again.
I feel you in this one. I see you in it. So painfully clear ..
I know this must be a sad remembrance, but somehow,
I find beauty here. And, oddly enough, a comfort.
xo
~Breezy |
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