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Dont Want To Fight Anymore
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:25:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i am so incomplete, without you
in my life or without you near,
i miss having you close and telling
you absoulutly everything, cuz
i screwed that up big time and now
i am trying to make up for it.
I stand still in the halls watching you
walk by like i am a ghost, that leaves
me heartbroken and makes me wanna
break down and cry, until i have no more
tears to cry.
You are like sisters to me, how could i
do something so stupid to lose that so
fast, i am srry for what i did, and how
i did it, i just want you back, i want you
as my best friends again.
I want it to be like old times, us having
fun just the three of us, being our stupid
self, not caring who was around or who
was watching us.
I want it back all back like the past, i was
just stupid for going with him, when i didnt
know who he was or what he was about.
I want that friendship back, i want to have
those fun memories with just the three of us,
staying up all night talking, and not fighting,
i want the fighting to stop and forget about
it.
I wish i could get what i was asking for,
but i aint sure if it will ever be the same again,
it may take time but i hope it gets back,
to what we where and how close we where,
the three charlies angels, memeber that guys
just lets work this out and forget about it.
Lindsey~ i dont want you moms prediction
to come true i dont want us to stop talking,
i dont want us stop being friends we have
been threw to much to just leave it behind
and act like it never happend, so lets forget
about this and move on and be friends again.
Hilary~ i know i havent known you long
but i love knowning you, your awsome and
my little sister, i dont want this fight to break
us up, and act like we were never friends,
i have always been there for you and you have
always been there for me, and i thank you for
that. lets queit this fighting and move on.
To my two sister Lindsey and Hilary
From Kimmie
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2005-05-15 21:25:36]
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Re: Dont Want To Fight Anymore
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by poet70 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:04:36 PM AEST
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Ok Kimmie, what I am about to write IS NOT TO BE MEAN, ok I am trying to help, you need to correct some misstypes, but girl, other then that it is wonderful and yes, if you feel like you need to pass this onto your ex friends, cos that is what it sounds like that's what they are at the time, I would go for it. But you need to do some revising, and do some correcting on like spelling, and little itty bitty changes, but not much ok? This again is not to tear down the poem, cos as it is , it is good, but could use some changes with spellings and such, it you really look it over you will see what I saw,
Great Poem, and hope with everything that it will get you three back together agiain, it is a painful thing to loose friends.
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Re: Dont Want To Fight Anymore
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:14:06 PM AEST
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Hey there,
Yes give it to them and a real friend will want the same as u.
Please take it easy on yourself, please?
Obviously u r taking all the blame but if they are angry at something u did then they need to evaluate their inner feelings.
Take care and stand with pride as u r a good writier and even if they don't see it this way jus remember u r importent too and that every one makes mistakes.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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