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Searching
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:17:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Searching for you
I want you and I to be true
Why can’t you see me?
Standing next to the tree
Hiding in the shadows
Look past all of these sorrows
You’ll see the old girl
The one who felt more real
Not this one who numbly
Lives every day, slowly
Can’t you see that you are what I need, friend?
Please do, or my life I will end
Help me out
Please don’t doubt
That it is you I want
Please help me out of this vent
I am stuck, searching for you
Reaching out for you, too
Please don’t walk by
Please help me and try
I know it’s difficult
And I know that’s my fault
I’m stuck here anyway
But please, try to help me today
I’ve searched for you day in, day out
Now it’s my time to doubt
Please come for me
Please help me be me
I’ve done my half of the search
Now, you complete the search
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2005-05-15 21:17:40]
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Re: Searching
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by emokid on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:38:04 PM AEST
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hey I've been there and you don't always get what you need or want in this life so you just got to get up no matter how much your broken legs scream for release or just end up in your own prison this is a voice that's been there and its not pretty but it does give good ink to use good write keep it up
Ian the emokid
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Re: Searching
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:47:23 AM AEST
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Hi Sprint
This will be crappy advice but I know I mentioned to kc that these things can't be forced. Maybe he has doubts about himself or how you will react? Guys get insecure, too. Does he really know how you feel? Sometimes when we communciate in subtlety, someone can miss the message and just be confused. I know it's hard to take that risk and really say you are interested, but that may be what he needs. Maybe make sure how knows you would like to be with him. |
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