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My Only Little Girl
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:42:40 PM in AEST
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My Only Little Girl
Black's so becoming
Silhouetting sadness.
White's the color of mourning
What you never had
In this world of nothingness.
The broken wings
Of the angel of happiness
Only brings
The death of her
Heaven shrouded in sinfulness.
I am silhouetted in black
For my little girl never to come back.
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:59:14 PM AEST
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Well Jen..I have told you why I do not like this on already, but It still has a great ending...as always
~Clark |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:31:41 PM AEST
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this is sooo sad.... beautifully, mezmerizingly hauntingly excellent poem... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:49:16 PM AEST
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such saddness in this one
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:22:03 AM AEST
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| This is heart breakingly sad and yet mesmerisingly beautiful..I love your poetry but this sadness is ever haunting..Venkat |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:43:20 AM AEST
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jus' the mere notion of ya sadness
leaves me in awe...
last stanza..
"I am silhouetted in black
For my little girl never to come back."
this moves me to tears...
so deep.. and very well written..
incredible!
M.O.H. |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by Sinned on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:09:25 AM AEST
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Essentially9
In sadness there is light.
Your little girl now in the purest white.
Death of a child is the hardest thing.
Know that she now is an angel being.
Through death new angels are born.
In heaven happiness goes on and on.
Sinned
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:23:06 AM AEST
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What a sad tragic write, So full of descriptions and powerfull range. I like this Jen.
Jane xxx |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:50:05 PM AEST
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such sadness and yet beautifuly written you
still know how to touch the heart . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:14:15 AM AEST
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The first line just amazed me and I loved
how the next line complimented it. The
imagery in this was stunning.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:38:56 PM AEST
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Is this really about the death of a little girl?
Or is it about the loss of your own childhood?
Thought provoking and well written as always for you! |
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Re: My Only Little Girl
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:13:27 AM AEST
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Very sad and moving, deep write. I liked it.
--amanda-- |
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