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I Wish
Contributed by
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 01:40:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Once I wondered what I really wish
I wish I could fly among the stars in the night sky
I whish I was less shy and could be more sly
I wish to dive into the depths of the unbeknown sea
I wish I could stare and look beyond of what others see
I wish that no flower would whither in the frost of winter
I wish the desert would enjoy the froth of ocean’s tears
Although light evaporates in lustfully obnoxious voids ever yearning of umbers
I wish that the sunrise would last forevermore
But those are void wishes, what my heart really yearns
Is to be by your side when you feel happy, when you feel sad
To be clasped hand in hand as we walk through life’s paths
To sense your breath in my ears and your hands around my neck
As we dance embraced, holding each other under the rain
To undergo together the good moments in life and also the bad
To feel the weight of your head over my chest as we lay in the turf
So you could be closer to my heart, so you could hear it beating fast
What I truly crave deep inside my aflame soul is to touch your skin
To kiss your sweet lips, to caress your soft hair, to be lost in your gaze
To feel the warmth of your smile upon my face all the time
And many other things I really wish, but those are linked to one wish
Which is: I wish you could love me as I love you.
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Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
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2002-07-22 13:40:40]
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Re: I Wish
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 05:51:26 AM AEST
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| Such beautiful things you say in those lines, I somehow always wanted my special one felt for me the way you feel about her, sadly is to say that alas I know to well, that no matter how much you love someone there are things that can harldy change if he or she loves you not, but I tell you somewhere there is someone who will feel for you, the same things you feel for her. |
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Re: I Wish
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 10:17:28 PM AEST
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| This poem has such a deep and true feeling in just so few words, it's wonderful that you feel that way and I am sure that the girl who inspired those feelings is also wodnerful |
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Re: I Wish
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by mysticpoet on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:17:55 PM AEST
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Your thoughts are beautiful, good poem.
Thanks |
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