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Rain
Contributed by
Jimmato
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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To the sound of running water
Blood gushes from my eyes
The teardrop sharpened razor
I live until I die
No one to kiss the boo-boos
No one to hold my hand
No one to feel my pain
I'm living in the rain
Slow the beating of my heart
The cannon fire dulls
Thick blood within a bathtub
I live a life of lies
No one to kiss me good night
No one to tuck me in
No pills to keep me sane
I'm living in the rain
Copyright ©
Jimmato
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2005-05-15 19:04:43]
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Re: Rain
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:08:23 PM AEST
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I really like the metophore here."im living in the rain"...Awesome poetry and great job
~Clark |
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Re: Rain
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:13:01 PM AEST
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wow that is rilly gud, i like it a lot. youre a brilliant writer, keep it up. i can relate to this a lot.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: Rain
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:56:28 PM AEST
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good write. full of power. i can relate to it. i wish i could help you, if you ever need anyone to talk to, PM me. no one should have to suffer like this. hope it works out ok.
~sprints |
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Re: Rain
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:03:27 AM AEST
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your words cut me in half..
I feel ya..
peace to you
M.O.H. |
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Re: Rain
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:13:00 AM AEST
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very powerfull wite, i loved the metaphore. this is an awsome poem.
SM |
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