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Immortal death
Contributed by
Keila
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 03:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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without a second thought,
i could destroy you,
my heart is cold like ice,
i have no compassion
immortality is a curse
I hold the fire in my hand
breathing ice,
touching truth i learn
all is dark
all is dead
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-05-15 15:26:50]
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Re: Immortal death
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:42:26 AM AEST
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dark and sad.
good job. |
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Re: Immortal death
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by fireydragon23 on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:40:37 AM AEST
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| Wow.......Morbid yet seductive. Awesome job |
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Re: Immortal death
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by grim6669 on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:48:57 AM AEST
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I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU FIT ALL OF THAT EMOTION INTO SUCH A SMALL POEM... YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY VERY TALENTED TO BE ABLE TO DO THAT...IT REMINDS ME OF SOME OF MY WORK... YOU SHOULD CHECK THEM OUT SOMETIME AND POST COMMENTS...BYE BYE
*~AMBER~* |
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