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Losing You!
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 04:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I walk the roads of dreary darkness,
worn and all alone,
I tried so hard to break these screams,
but "its you" I cannot hold,
I slip away ..... inside the night,
granted no-one sees,
I try to find the power,
but again ..... death speaks to me,
Hoping somehow .... somewhere,
my spirit wouldn't drain,
and down this dreary road,
I could wander without pain,
Darkness stands as my own shadow,
no light could fill this void,
emptiness aches inside me,
my heart holds not a joy,
I begged and prayed, it wouldn't be,
as darkness stills the night,
Is my spirit, a draining soul,
that hopes to find whats right,
My mind drifts on, as a turning page,
wandering in a hole,
back to you, my tears begin,
'why is death, sooooo ....... very cold,
When will this end, I scream,
and my echo'es chill ..... returns,
Life is Life, and Death is Death,
and you will feel the burn,
My spirit fights the pain,
that leaks of broken love,
my questions aren't answered,
though my veins have lost more blood,
Why must I lose ..... another child,
and bear the worst of pain,
as I walk another mile down,
to identify her remains!
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2002-12-30 04:40:00]
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Re: Losing You!
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by EmSal on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:09:37 AM AEST
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| That poem is so sad, loved it though. So many people die out on the roads, I've also been in some terrible accidents but not to do with a stupid prank - that prank was awful, even if she didn't lose her life I reckon they should've been punished for that prank anyway. |
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Re: Losing You!
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by Mystery_Girl on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:51:25 AM AEST
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| This is really sad.......take care...tanya.... |
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Re: Losing You!
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 06:11:07 AM AEST
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This is such an incredible poem ... I feel so badly for you ... the last verse was a shock and makes you realise the stark reality of what it would be like to lose a child.
Powerful poem. Well written. |
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Re: Losing You!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 08:42:42 AM AEST
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| An incredibly powerful write... it's hard enough to lose a loved one... but to lose one to the stupid actions of others must be even worse. My thoughts are with you. |
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Re: Losing You!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:38:43 AM AEST
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| OMG This really got to me,it made me cry of course! I cant imagine how people could do that! How horribly sad,Oct. is a bad month for me too! This was so beautifully done in her honor! Christina |
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Re: Losing You!
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by Vampy on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:33:20 PM AEST
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| Wow.. this one almost leaves me speechless. It's such a horrible loss, but you've written about it in such a beautiful way. This one brought tears to my eyes... |
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Re: Losing You!
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by Jayraja on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:17:46 PM AEST
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Good Lord, This is so painful. Only God can comfort you and give you the strength to bear this loss.
You write beautifully my friend, the pain and the sorrow is felt.
Love from India - Joel - |
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Re: Losing You!
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:04:43 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful "Goodbye", Valerie. Very sad, but very beautiful. What a waste of life over a stupid act. I'm so sorry for your loss. |
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Re: Losing You!
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:59:08 PM AEST
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And so many times people say to one who is serious....."Why can't you take a joke"....."It was only a joke"....THIS is why i dont do jokes well......there is a place and time for pranks and jokes and out on the highway isn't where they should be played....this hurts reading this......it's so painful...as i can feel the pain you must have endured with this......my god Valerie im in tears for your pain deeply here girl....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Losing You!
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 07:10:12 PM AEST
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| powerful write...too many times others do not look at thier actions...we need to try harder to see how we effect others...you and your family will be in my prayers |
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Re: Losing You!
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 09:12:01 PM AEST
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Dearest Valerie,
Truely a Beautiful tribute for your dear daughter, so sad, I'm so sorry... I too lost someone dear to me in an accident, life forever altered... I feel your pain, know your heart is breaking.. am so sorry for your loss my friend, here if you want to talk..
much love and a huge hugg,
always Nessa
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Re: Losing You!
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:05:48 AM AEST
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Oh Val!
This is so beautifully written, my heart screams out for your loss. I can't even begin to grasp your pain and what you are going through.
You of the beautiful soul, how is it you still have such strong faith.
You walk with me in my heart as does Nathan.
Love
Dallas |
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