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Something in your eyes...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 01:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Something in your eyes
Is what first made me notice you
But then I started noticing
All the caring things you do
Something in your eyes
Shows me it still ok to yearn
You do so much for others
Asking nothing in return
Something in your eyes
Says that things will be alright
If I can make it through today
I just may see those eyes tonight
Something in your eyes
Tells me things aren’t so bad
Sometimes we just won’t get
What we just aren’t meant to have
Yet something in your eyes
Changes when you see his face…
I see the look you get
And how none could take his place
Something in your eyes
Shows how much you care for him
So I must hide this longing
And keep it deep within
Something in your eyes
Showed me from the very start
The path for me is blocked
That leads to your heart
So I'll stay hidden in his shadow
Trying hard to hide my sighs
Hoping one day I could be
Something in your eyes...
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:52:24 PM AEST
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*sigh*...Beautiful... Ty for sharin
May be hidden within the eyes
for protection of the heart..
Wishing you luck..
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 03:33:00 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful. Makes me want to be something in somebody eyes with that one person again. She's lucky to have somebody like you by her side. Beautifully written. I enjoy reading everything that you write. |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:45:49 PM AEST
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The EYES have it!! Wonderful write.. Well written..
Jenni |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by RejectionOfConformity on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:30:20 PM AEST
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Amazing poem, bravo. The entire poem made me think about how lucky I am.
Good Luck
-Zak |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:55:43 PM AEST
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This is very well written and it touched my heart. Beautiful
Leia |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:35:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful, holder. Heartbreakingly so. I don't know if this will make any sense... but this comes in a quiet voice and it is simply more potent because of that.
*sigh* ... yeh.
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:59:33 AM AEST
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| it doesn't matter if she sees you, you'll always be something in my eyes. good write. |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:01:31 AM AEST
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| wow, beautiful! |
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Re: Something in your eyes...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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This is truly beautiful! I also can so relate to it...especially to this:
Hoping one day I could be
Something in your eyes...
I completely understand.
Thank you for pointing this one out to me and I am sorry I missed it the first time around.
Tim |
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