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Slice Slice
Contributed by
dreaming-of-your-love
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:44:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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she look around slice slice on her arm
She just cant stop the pain
slice slice on her leg with all the blood flowing down
please god help her with this pain know
slice slice on her wrist help her from making a big mistake
that she have cause bunchest of pain
slice slice she just cant stop please someone help her right know
slice slice slice she just cant stop
she died know
thank to those who try to help
you just pushed her more to it
maby if you would just be nice once in your life
you would not see so many kids passing away
beacuse of your selfehness
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2005-05-15 10:44:24]
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Re: Slice Slice
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by distortedmind on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:49:57 PM AEST
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| that was really good it had a lot of very descriptive words in it |
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Re: Slice Slice
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:46:45 AM AEST
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I read this one before, I just didn't know what to say. Cutting is beyond my understanding. It bothers me to know someone I care about is doing it. You are loved and there are people out there that are more than willing to listen to you if you need someone to talk to. OK? This write was painful to read and I imagine, painful to write. The write itself was good.
Luv Ya, Sweetie
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