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flashbacks
Contributed by
Streamingdreams
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 05:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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hello stranger
why do you look so familiar
hello mister
why can't you just disappear
I'm so confused
Don't give me your views
'cos I'm strangled within myself
Tied in my own thoughts
I can't handle anymore
of your rubbish
gibberish
don't give me that look
'cos I'm totally booked
I won't need the blues
ANYMORE
Just let the rain pour
upon my head
let the problems fade
all away
Face a new day
Goodbye stranger
I guess I won't meet you anytime soon
Goodbye mister
You don't go
I will
Copyright ©
Streamingdreams
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2005-05-15 05:07:12]
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Re: flashbacks
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by Nos_Bunny on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:08:30 AM AEST
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| Thats odd, I get alot of flashbacks, you obviously get ones of your own, I liked this, its kinda strange how people read your poem but can't be bothered to comment or give it a score, it was very well done. |
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Re: flashbacks
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:11:26 AM AEST
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I like this part:
"Don't give me your views
'cos I'm strangled within myself
Tied in my own thoughts
I can't handle anymore
of your rubbish
gibberish"
This is good. Different to a lot of poetry I have seen.
It has a sort of confused feeling about it.
Good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: flashbacks
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:09:48 AM AEST
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i agree with phil...
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those parts were the best sentances in your poem.
... i some times get flash backs too.
i can relate to this... |
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