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Story 2 (Till came Andy)

Contributed by Streamingdreams on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 05:06:22 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional

There was a girl
Noone knew her
Not even herself
She was known as herself only

She only knew
Her life's due
But don't know when
Is the end

She's been lonely all her life
She's got friends bu less than five
She always get into fights
She sometimes cry at nights

Don't know how to cure off the misery
Till came Andy

Now Andy has left her
She feels her life pass in a blur

Andy loved her with all his might
And that was how he died
He always help her pull thru
Those really tough blues

Yet he almost gave up
Until someone gave him advises in a pub
That man cautioned Andy
And those warnings were just handy

'cos Andy was lost inside
And so was that girl too
He decided to help her outta that hole
But decided to stay in it though

'cos he thought of ont thing immediately

He felt she needs to learn
So he left himself to burn
He knew he'd miss her
But he'd be able to see her
Everyday

Copyright © Streamingdreams ... [ 2005-05-15 05:06:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Story 2 (Till came Andy) (User Rating: 1 )
by sara7dryad on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:58:23 AM AEST
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that's really an awesome poem...made me want to cry.

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