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Sales in Stereo
Contributed by
pleasantchap
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:14:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'll show you what it does but won't tell you what the price is,
This is a party and your partly invited,
Welcome to my world, do not push your limits,
Keep the Q&A simple, help yourself to the spirits,
It's a battle of wills, are you willing?
It's a barrel of thrills ripe for the killing,
Step over here and let me assure you,
Don't believe that, I adore you,
Yes there is that, but please consider this,
I'm glad you realise that was a near miss,
Absolutely crisp, no crackle or hiss,
A majestical abyss of raw bliss,
Out, around, inside, back through you,
A myth, a spell, a shock, a hoodoo,
An echo, a drive, a big shot through,
So much, so what to do?
Copyright ©
pleasantchap
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2005-05-15 04:14:46]
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Re: Sales in Stereo
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:22:43 AM AEST
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Wow, this is interesting.
I like this a lot. It seems to be really fast, the flow rushes off and takes you with it.
A good, thought provoking write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Sales in Stereo
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:55:54 AM AEST
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Well, you must be an excellent salesman. You had my head spinning here. I would of brought whatever you were selling. This is quite unique and I thoroughly enjoyed it to the hilt.
Rita |
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Re: Sales in Stereo
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:16:33 PM AEST
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| Enjoyable poem, undeniable whatever is being sold is buyable. Has it sold yet? |
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