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The Carnival
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:14:06 AM in AEST
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My limbs tingle
With unknown force
Sending me messages
I'd rather not recieve
Lying awake, at night
Thoughts emptying to ends
Ideas endlessly flowing
To where blood will not
Too young to die
We all wear Death
Like a smoking jacket
Smoking at the seams
Hints and suggestions
Bubble from below
We can all smile happy
Sitting on the same sharp wire
Little things pop
Like balloons not grasped
Floating to the sky
The carnival is cheap
Guess my weight
And pound the hammer
I could spin it off
But the tickets are short
Cotton Candy
Fluff for the taste
Big and distracting
The real value is free
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2005-05-15 04:14:06]
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Re: The Carnival
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by Absent on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:35:53 AM AEST
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| Very thought provoking. It seems very dark. I like it alot. |
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Re: The Carnival
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:25:33 AM AEST
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Wow. This is interesting, too.
I have no idea what this is about, and like the other person said, this is a very thought provoking write.
I love the images in this.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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