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dreams so real

Contributed by brokenwings on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:06:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

here i go again making the call
i within the hours he'll be here again
we'll make love not hiding it at all
but in the morning he'll walk out of my life
and i'll be in pain but for tonight i will love him
with all that i am, and only pray that he will stay

there is the knock on the door
and we are making love like manytimes before
but there is something so different in his touch
he looks in my eyes and say he loves me
so very much
and he don't want to leave me be.
but i can keep him he wont ask to be freed
he loves me this indeed
my greats dreams have come true
and my heart no longer blue...

sun light breaks and shines bright on my face
the place next to me in the bed i trace
with my fingertips
and reach to touch his hips
but there nothing there

i wake completely up
and only find my notebook
with the letter i wrote to him
and my bed is as empty as his heart
finally the dreams stole my love's start

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-05-15 04:06:25]
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Re: dreams so real (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:59:05 PM AEST
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Oh Tasha this is so sad. It was heartwrenching for me. I hope this really didn't happen to you, and if it did, you must be heartbroken.
You have so much talent, Tasha, I love the way you word your poems, and they are nice and smooth and easy for your reader's to read.
Hope this wasn't you but just in case
here's lots of hugs
Warm Love
consue

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