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Dare
Contributed by
jaavys
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm peeking through the window
And you are not aware
That I will take your picture
And keep it just to stare
I'm peeking through the window
And you your body bare
And I will take your picture
And want your body, dare
To wish, to share your air
To wish, to touch your hair
I'm peeking through the window
To look into your soul
And I will take your picture
Forever to behold
I'm peeking through the window
And you a moment rare
And I will frame your picture
With tears of this affair
Copyright ©
jaavys
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2002-12-30 03:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dare
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:12:23 AM AEST (User
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Sad but nice rhyming poem! |
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Re: Dare
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaavys on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 06:04:04 AM AEST (User
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I was not sad when I wrote it. but it is not a happy theme. later |
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Re: Dare
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 06:12:51 PM AEST (User
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Very good write jaavys... I especially like the last stanza... keep it up!! :) |
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