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THESE DAYS
Contributed by
kydistortion69
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:35:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In this time when pain finds
comfort in all it's desired land-
Man has fallen to his knees to
beg for pain to take his hand-
In these days of blackened sin
love has drowned from hatred's gift-
Love, Pain, Desire the same
blackened, drowning, begging for
the unforgiving and insane.
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kydistortion69
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2005-05-14 23:35:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THESE DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by RejectionOfConformity on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 01:02:46 PM AEST (User
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Tons of emotion fill this poem. My favorite line was this one;
"Man has fallen to his knees to
beg for pain to take his hand-" |
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