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I am.
Contributed by
RejectionOfConformity
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am sad and confused,
I wonder if it was meant to be,
I hear her voice,
I see her face,
I want her love -- her kiss,
I am sad and confused.
I pretend that it doesn't matter,
I feel love and passion,
I her her lips on mine,
I worry -- will it last(?),
I cry out loud -- time stands still,
I am sad and confused.
I understand life and death,
I say I don't care,
I dream that love would be true,
I try to make it work,
I hope she knows,
I am sad and confused.
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Re: I am.
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:45:10 PM AEST
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This is a ok poem, the "I" thing is a little repititous, other then that it shows your hope and grim of what you know to be true..
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Re: I am.
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:13:38 PM AEST
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That's different but good. I liked it how you used "I" a lot. Yeah, it was repetative but it made it unique. Good job!
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