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The Wait
Contributed by
garyh
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:28:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time Clicks as I await
The hour ends before my take
Sitting, thinking, waiting; my mind escapes
The day grows old as night passes
Wolves crying, coyotes howling; anticipating
Watching, staring, seeing -- nothing
Silence begins the day
as morning comes without notice
Tears begin to fall, slowly
The day moves on without hope
Wishing to be what is not to be
The sun moves to its peak
without a whisper or retreat
Time moving, but still empty
Stomach aching, curling
Still waiting
Copyright ©
garyh
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2005-05-14 23:28:42]
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Re: The Wait
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 03:59:47 AM AEST
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I really liked the way you wrote this. The flow of your words where wonderfuly done.
Thanks for posting.
Jane xxx |
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Re: The Wait
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by RejectionOfConformity on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:32:34 PM AEST
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The people whom commented before me couldn't have said it any better, great poem overall.
Good Luck
-Zak |
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