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Decompostion
Contributed by
papaya322
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She really loves me
She definately does not
My heart beats for you
Like a steady horse trot
She said she loved him
And would always listen
When he heard those hopeful words
His heart sparkled with a glisten
But then she faltered
Her mind was altered
Another lover was in her sight
She told him to wait
Her decision would decide his fate
He couldnt stand to live the night
He took the knife
And scraped it sharp
The burden way too huge
That dagger soon plunged straight through his heart
So does she love me?
Or does she not?
Why, my love, have you left me here to rot?
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papaya322
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2005-05-14 22:20:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Decompostion
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:23:53 PM AEST (User
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very intense but great poem keep writing please read my poem "how it all started" and tell me what yew think, its quite different then this, just wondered if yewd like it. This was a great poem, keep writing ~Chrissy |
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