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Im gonna have to make it
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:10:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You told me i meant everything to yew,
Yew told me that i was the only one yew cared for,
and all i thought bout was me and yew.
Yew left me here on my bed,
crying bout all the things yew said
Yew made me feel so great,
then yew turned around and kept showing up late.
I figured out that i wasnt the only one that there were a few others playing along.
Yew made me feel so complete
too bad we didnt make it,
instead yew hurt our chances and broke our relationship a bit.
Even though yew hurt me so much i cant help my feeling for yew,
Im still, babe, im still in love with yew!!
Theres always those people yew will never forget,
and yew are one of mine.
But right bout now ive realized im doin just fine.
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Re: Im gonna have to make it
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:32:14 PM AEST (User
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very good poem, it's strong. and i hope that last stanza is true. cause you shouldn't forget the person, but you shouldn't live hoping they'll come back. doing fine is better than doing bad. hope it works out!
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