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medicated
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
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quit asking me to solve it all
i can't find anything else to fix
there was never anything wrong
dont ask me to breathe again
im drowning in myself, falling in it all
stop asking me im not that strong
new days apathy has struck again
sickened strength , rotting lungs
medicate me because yesterdays gone
i've lost all presence
let me feed off your essence
theres no substance behind meaning
tell me that you can feel what i've been feeling
the sound medicates me , is that so wrong?
we've been standing still for so long
ill take this breath and let my lungs rot away
but just dont ask me again
new days apathy has struck again
passing strength, and rotting lungs
medicate me because i felt yesterday leave
the sounds leading to the obvious
your hands lend me a new drug
my breath ends the infinite.
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fallensilence
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2002-12-30 02:00:00]
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Re: medicated
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by EmSal on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:16:46 AM AEST
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Re: medicated
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by chantel on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:26:00 PM AEST
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let me just say this is a wonderfull poem it holds a lot of emotion especially the last line i relly like that one you keep up the good work
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