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Her
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:04:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I made your life unbearable,
To the point where you drank yourself away.
I could've changed my all,
If only you would've stayed.
When you left me,
Guilt and blame burned within.
The anger, the bitter sadness,
Was taken out on my innocent skin.
I pushed past the pain,
And moved on with my life.
Well that wound still festers,
And remainders are left made by the knife.
The ache has caught up with me,
As I'm feeling the burn I hid below.
Now a new girl lies in his arms,
As my blood and tears both flow.
She gives him happiness,
The kind I couldn't give.
Now I see him happily with her,
And I no longer want to live.
It's not my face,
He dreams about in deep slumber.
With gun at point, knife at vein,
I look at my life and wonder.
Why is he happier with her?
Why has she stolen his heart?
Was I as crazy as he said?
Did I really make him fall apart?
My place is in his past,
His present, his future is her.
So despite his happiness, my sadness,
I remain but a blurr.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-05-14 17:04:10]
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Re: Her
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by twisted_dreams on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:17:58 PM AEST
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that is a great poem.. and that is how i fealt when my boyfriend left me... anyways great gob and keep it up!!
*Sidney* |
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Re: Her
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by wetnwild on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 05:50:32 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, I can really relate with experiences I have had with my past boyfriends!! Keep up the great work! |
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