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Ode To A Virgin
Contributed by
dark_descent
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 03:30:40 PM in AEST
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Flawless beauty inside and out.
Your creamy complexion,
Your blood red lips glisten with unknown passion.
Your eyes bright with potential,
Set serenely in a dark sky
Distant and unattainable,
Pure and untouched.
Your flesh is cool but your blood runs warm.
You are yet to know love,
Torturous and insatiable,
Both a curse and a blessing.
You lie in your bed
Sleeping peacefully
Alone.
A glimmering light in the gloom.
Herein lies your innocence young vigin,
Your bed will be your tomb.
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dark_descent
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2005-05-14 15:30:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ode To A Virgin
(User Rating: 1 ) by surge_joebot on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:28:00 PM AEST (User
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ooo very dark, i like it, it has powerful imagary :D
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Re: Ode To A Virgin
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:38:16 PM AEST (User
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Awww..Very entertaining piece as always...the ending is great, very dark as usual too..Great jod, As always
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Re: Ode To A Virgin
(User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:11:29 PM AEST (User
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never a truer word spoken...
I like reading stuff ya dont have to think to much about...(jus' move me already..lol)
and this hit me right away...
awesome imagery...
and wicked..
love it
M.O.H. |
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