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You
Contributed by
somedaylove
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 12:42:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I open my eyes
As I awaken.
I see you for a moment
Before from my mind you are taken
I stand in the shower
Hot water on my back and shampoo in my hair
I feel your sweet caress
It’s as thou you are there
As I'm driving to work
In the cars that go pass
I swear that I see you
Its not you, just another lass
While I sit at my desk working
A glance at your picture and I'm no longer blue
As the stress of the day starts to get to me
I feel you massage me in that special way that you do
I stop by the store on my way home
Walking down the isle I smell that scent
Was that your voice that I heard?
I can't stop it, my mind is bent
At home I go threw the motion
Watch TV, clean and off to play a few games
Here but not really my thoughts are of you
Wishing you were here as I read threw the names
And now it is late, I'm tired
It was a very long day
Its time to head to dream land
So with you I may lay
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somedaylove
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2005-05-14 12:42:43]
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Re: You
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:02:51 PM AEST
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very sweet. shows how memories will always "haunt" you. Time is only a partial solution. the heart and mind never forget.
please comment on my work too
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Re: You
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:16:40 PM AEST
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sad but beautiful thoughts wish u well . . .
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Re: You
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:54:01 PM AEST
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This is a lovely piece of work. Yes, those memories do stay with you forever. They are so deeply imprinted in your mind and heart they never go away. Great work.
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Re: You
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:29:06 AM AEST
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A truly sad and heartfelt write. Memories are always there 4 us to fall back on. A very well written poem.
*hugs*
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