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My Love is Like a Rose
Contributed by
ShortVerse
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 12:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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My love is like a rose,
Each spring it comes
Each winter it goes.
As the thorns go deeper and deeper
into my heart,
Then I know we'll never part.
But when the roots will grow no further.
Then I know I must choose another.
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Re: My Love is Like a Rose
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:00:18 PM AEST
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interesting...when i read this i thought about how thorns cause pain. pain in your heart. roots grow and help you survive. maybe it should be the other way around. good job though.
please comment on my work too
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Re: My Love is Like a Rose
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by shelby on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:09:28 PM AEST
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good job love complementing roses and thorns
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