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Loner
Contributed by
dragonfly
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:28:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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There's nothing more to say.
You crossed a fine line.
For this you'll have to pay.
I refuse to hear you whine.
You call yourself a friend.
All you speak are lies.
I can tell this is the end.
I don't think I need to say why.
You really ***** up this time.
You don't control me.
I told you from the start.
Your obsessive, jealous ways
Are what tore us apart.
You're no longer a friend.
Just another ***** in the crowd.
I say this is the end.
I wish I could scream and shout.
This whole time you were a fake.
Your intentions were unclear.
Into your head I drive a stake.
Wish I could make you dissappear.
All you've brought is bull*****.
With your manipulative ways
I fell into your pit.
For this, my heart aches.
How could I be so blind?
It's all open, your transparency bright.
I thought I could unwind
But you sent me screeching
Through the night.
You backed yourself in a corner.
You're wrong, and I'm right.
All you'll ever be is a loner.
You really ***** up this time.
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dragonfly
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2005-05-13 23:28:07]
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Re: Loner
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by Kyarn on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:13:14 AM AEST
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| Good. A lot of emotion obviously went into this. Nice job. |
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Re: Loner
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:23:05 PM AEST
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| Great poem! You really capture your emontions and what you want to say. |
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Re: Loner
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by dark_descent on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:32:10 PM AEST
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very emotive, I could really feel the anger in this poem. I loved it! Keep up the good work!
Jen x |
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