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tell me you love me
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take the gun and tell me you love me.
Stand there naked and tell me you love me.
Take the gun and show me you love me.
Stand back and show me you love me.
Give me the gun to show me you love me.
Stand back and let me love you.
Take my bullet and don't doubt that I love you.
With a mouthful of blood tell me you love me.
You cant look at my bruises and tell me you love me.
With a fistful of hate you tell me you love me.
You cant hit me with the iron and tell me you love me.
You cant tell me you love me with a face full of bullet.
Hurry up and die, then tell me you love me.
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2005-05-13 23:16:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: tell me you love me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kyarn on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:10:19 AM AEST (User
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Quite good. I really like this, it's very well written. |
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