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My Word's on the Paper
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 09:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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5/13/2005, 8:46 PM
I want to write what I feel,
I can’t seem to find the words that are real,
Urged to open up my skin,
Grab the glass sink it in,
Afterwards feel the warmth of the cuts,
What a beautiful sensational rush,
When is it going to be enough?
Shaken hands I can’t write,
Thoughts pour in my sight,
Cuts ooze,
Scars pink,
Everything erased,
No time to think,
Will I make it through tonight?
Will another day come my way?
My tears slip down my face,
Who will find me when I’ve lost my place?
Sighs a minuet pass on by,
Maybe tonight I will die,
Slice to deep,
Cut to long,
Lay on the floor,
I’ll bleed to death,
Find my peace in some paradise.
Trying to close the picture’s out,
Should I stand up and shout?
Does anyone care what this is all about?
It’s been a week I’m still afraid,
I hope I can make it till 2 weeks,
Recovering is all that I’m ready to seek.
Copyright ©
KishaLovesCare126
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2005-05-13 21:16:07]
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Re: My Word's on the Paper
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 09:30:55 PM AEST
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Kisha
This is well written, but heartbreaking. My heart goes out to you sweetie, as well as my prayers!!!! Keep writing and god bless
Leia |
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Re: My Word's on the Paper
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by grin69 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:11:24 PM AEST
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| Hang in there. |
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Re: My Word's on the Paper
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:31:25 PM AEST
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| This is a good write and it was very well worded and really draws you in to the pain. I can really feel what your feeling and relate. So much in life is pain and it really does feel like this is the only way to make it stop. Take care my friend and remember you have me here anytime you need to talk. The only life I have over here is my friends online and its great to read your writes and see that I’m not the only one living in so much pain. Take care my friend and I hope all is well in your life….Steve |
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Re: My Word's on the Paper
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:32:27 PM AEST
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| This is a good write and it was very well worded and really draws you in to the pain. I can really feel what your feeling and relate. So much in life is pain and it really does feel like this is the only way to make it stop. Take care my friend and remember you have me here anytime you need to talk. The only life I have over here is my friends online and its great to read your writes and see that I’m not the only one living in so much pain. Take care my friend and I hope all is well in your life….Steve |
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Re: My Word's on the Paper
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:22:23 AM AEST
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| very emotional, i feel for you i also feel the same way i actually used to cut..i just stopped a few weeks ago and it is really hard not to i know exactly how yew feel hang in there though try avoiding it keep writing best of luck to yew so yew can stop ~*Chrissy*~ |
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