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Bright Eyes
Contributed by
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 01:38:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Although I yearn only for the divine touch of your lips
Lame I am for I can only tell through this pitiful letter
Epistle of what I greatly feel about you, my fair lady
Just want to say this I love you greatly and wholly
Alas for I am not a perfect match for you
Nevertheless I will yield to you my soul and heart
Despite the way you feel about your humble slave
Really I mean what I say for my feelings are true and faithful
And so hereafter are written the sweeter words I could make
My lady, fair and alluring, your eyes are stars
Absorbed I am in their shimmering light
You glow with loveliness took out of the flames
Nurtured in the wisdom of God’s perfect hands
Enthralled I am by the charm of your voice’s blaze which
Zooms poignant and echoes in the deeps of my mind
Rivers of honey from your mouth cometh without end
Intertwined in your arms I crave to be for all time
Void I am without your kind warmth to shine in my life
Ere I knew you, lost in the darkness of solitude I was
Roses and the white of the clouds in the open sky
Art mingled in the splendor of your lovely face
I crave only for the sweetest embrace of your arms
Lost in the deeps your bright eyes I want to be
Oblivion and a sea of sorrow and grief I rather that with you be no more
Vastly I love you, as much as the sand grains in the beach
Eternally I will vow to be by your side, until death does her part
Yet to be torn apart from you I couldn’t abide
O vindictive fate, that doomed me to love such a bright star
Utterly my heart will shatter if you are not with me
Zephyr blows the scent of your dark hairs
Zestfully I praise and hail your exquisiteness
The splendor, that dims the morning sunlight,
The prettiness of blossoming gardens you reflect
And your coral-red lips beckons mines
A gentle lass with a kind glance, glimpse of perfection
Portending the glory of heaven, your dazzling face is
Perfect mouth destined to be the cause of my demise
Copyright ©
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
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2002-07-22 13:38:19]
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:33:48 PM AEST
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What a strange poem, it's full of a rich language, and yet I think that the true meaning of the poem is writen with the simplest words, which nevertheless holds the greater meaning, for there's nothing as hard to say as I love you, though the words are so simple, the meaning is the deeper that can be found.
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by DreamsOfDark on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:28:00 PM AEST
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| It is beautiful and deep. The way you expressed an emotion that i impossble to describe was the closest interpretation I have ever heard. But it truly was awsome and awe-inspiring... |
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Re: Bright Eyes
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by Chenobi on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 02:45:23 PM AEST
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| You have proved that you're worth reading. Your mind is very powerful. You could hit people with words, turn weapons to air. Every word is so wisely choosen, considered whether or not it was worth the emotion. I like reading your mind this way. Beautiful. |
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