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the garden
Contributed by
thousandfold
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Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i wander through a dying garden
the leaves fall and the grass cries dew
like blood—
among the corpses and wailing dead
a beautiful bloom of white
waves a banner of Life in a rotting world
i see a figure
pulling petals off Hope—
this is my garden
that weeps and mourns
and quietly crumbles
like the flower in your grasp.
Copyright ©
thousandfold
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2002-12-29 23:00:00]
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Re: the garden
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:26:09 AM AEST
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Dear Thousandfold @-<-<<
Awwww I love this poem... how so like people your poor white rose of hope.. an excellent write... thank you very much for sharing this..
Your writing friend always Nessa |
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Re: the garden
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:50:51 AM AEST
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| Awesome write... I like it! |
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Re: the garden
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:49:36 AM AEST
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| this is preciously beautiful... blessings... |
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Re: the garden
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:45:41 AM AEST
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This is a truly beautiful poem. There are just no words to describe it's beauty.
ShadowsCloud |
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