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You Light Up My World

Contributed by Tiki on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:25:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You light up my world in so many ways,
That its even so hard for me to explain.
Every since you've moved into my life,
Everything all of a sudden began to seem bright.
You've helped me to see a different part to my world,
It's like when im with you, everything begins to unfold.
I mean things may still be bad and it just won't change,
But when im in your arms, things are in such a happy and soothing stage.
I never actually felt so safe with anyone like this before,
And its starting to turn into something that I absolutely adore.
I'm so happy that we've found each other now,
Because things are much brighter, like its been taken from a fairy tale wedding vow.
It seems weird sometimes because I feel like I'm really falling for you,
And I don't know how to react, because I've never had someone care for me like you do.
I love the fact that when I'm sad, you say the right thing to ensure me that things are alrite,
I mean, you might not know that you do, but its almost like I'm a princess being rescued by her charming knight.
I'm very fortunate and estatic to be your girl,
Because you really do Light Up My World.

Copyright © Tiki ... [ 2005-05-13 16:25:57]
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Re: You Light Up My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:19:35 PM AEST
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I found this rather beautiful. There's a great deal of real joy in it, and that's a refreshing thing to read about. You might consider a more definite verse structure though, if possible. This is good, but it needs shorter lines and more concise expression to give it a truly lyrical feel.

Keep it up, my friend.

Andrew

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