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I hate
Contributed by
Supergurl1071
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:41:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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You think you're so much better
you think you have it all
you'd rather just sit back and let me take the fall
you never cared about me
if you did then why
would you act this way, when I've done nothing wrong
so maybe I was a little weird
I had to have my time
to get over these demons in my head
I'm sorry if you couldn't take it
but you try and act like
it's all my fault
when I'm not the one who treats people like crap
You say I'm so immature
but you haven't looked in the mirror lately
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Supergurl1071
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2005-05-13 12:41:54]
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Re: I hate
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:38:46 PM AEST
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loved it loved it loved it!
need i say more?
~vermillion~ |
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Re: I hate
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:46:17 PM AEST
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Powerful write...well said..
Jenni |
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Re: I hate
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by dthwlkr on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:04:17 PM AEST
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nicely written no doubt,reminds me of "i die" i had written
its real gud,seems u were really hurt and ***** off with some people wen u wrote this its a nice powerful write
i like the transition from self-pity in the first few lines to the signs of emergence of rage in the last line,
i seriously feel that u could have elaborated a bit more on the base of the last line,seems a little incomplete but gud nonetheless
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