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seeing is beleiving
Contributed by
candi
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:04:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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evertime life goes wrong
i come to you and pray
but it seems when the does worst come
you seem to turn away
its hard for me to beleive
in what i cannot see
and i do not see you helping
when the worst always happens to me
i cannot feel your joy
or pain
or hear you when u cry
everyone says to say hello
but mostly i say goodbye
i try to hear you
and see you
and feel you
but i am that one lost sheep
that one day might some back to you
but for now
to myself i keep
i will not say i dont beleive
or that i run astray
but it seems that when i come to you
you always walk away
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candi
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Re: seeing is beleiving
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:45:13 AM AEST
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| This is not true Jesus is always with you he doesnt never leave you .. sometimes it just takes prayers longer to be answered! anyways I love the poem .. Great Write.:) |
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Re: seeing is beleiving
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by twisted_dreams on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:22:58 AM AEST
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i sort of agree with you.. sometimes i talk to god and i feel like he isnt even listening.. but i know that he always listens and he is there for you no matter what!! never forget that and still keep trying,. .sooner or later he will answer you and help you wiht everything you need! Anyways great write.. keep it up..
*Sidney* |
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Re: seeing is beleiving
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:28:20 AM AEST
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your life is a chain of events that will not make sense until the bitter end, when it all matches up and makes perfect sense.... God has a plan and whether you agree with him right now, he has it for your well being and good, so just understand that although life does not go your way, it does turn out for the best.
The poem was wonderfully written, and you do have talent, but first I think you need to let go of your broken dreams and wishes and then God can help you with waht you ask... letting go is the first step. |
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