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Hour of Need
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Oh God please hear this prayer in thy hour of need
Notice my sighs and of my quiet torment take heed
My self-condemning heart is crying out to you
It is tonight of your holy comfort I pursue
I must utter a prayer for I don’t know what else to do
In untold despair I call out shall I ever find you?
I sin everyday Father so I am undeserving of your thought
But I ask of your guidance now bow down to you I ought
Do you really see this unspeakable pain I have to hold?
Do you already know that I am waning in this world so cold?
I am sorry for I am wicked and contain no righteousness
Impart in me some joy a hopeful seed of happiness
I need your help oh Almighty give me a reason to survive
Can you see through your lofty eyes?
That I know longer want to be alive
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-05-12 23:10:39]
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Re: Hour of Need
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:06:44 AM AEST
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| Nice poem i liked it .. i also pray to God and it seems to help me alot. |
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Re: Hour of Need
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by mannyrich on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:43:29 AM AEST
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a very nice poem. another outstanding writing from you. i like it so much.
your friend,
manny rich |
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Re: Hour of Need
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:31:43 AM AEST
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Rach this is a deep and emotional write. I felt ur pain within every word. Hang tuff my friend. I'm here if ya need me ok.
An outstanding heartfelt poem expressed so deep and so well. You go girl. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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