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you fake
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Strip you make believe perfection
Stop waiting for never coming salvation
Cause in reality, life just sucks
Stop begging, nobody gives a pity *****.
Your true face is haunted
Your self-conscience is taunted
You see your true self form
But holding your fake that is torn.
Let yourself feel what life feels
let it go, put yourself on your knees
***** your fantasy!
This is reality!
Look at yourself, you're just a fake
It's not you, it's not your fate
What the ***** is with your gangster signs?
Sorry but you look like you're just nine
Look inside through your heart that is bleeding
Reality... that's what you really are needing.
You fake...
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vampyrekiss
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2005-05-12 22:24:33]
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Re: you fake
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by emokid on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:33:13 PM AEST
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| I know what your talking about and I hate it as much as you. WHat really gets me is that they'll talk about killing someone and then say praise god but this is a really good poem. |
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Re: you fake
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:05:15 PM AEST
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Yes i know where you are coming from..
there is alot of them out there.. Great poem.
I liked it. |
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Re: you fake
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:15:54 PM AEST
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ha ha
the fake gangsters are quite annoying
black and white
foolish
yet in some ways very funny
in a sad way.
Good one...... |
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Re: you fake
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:25:15 AM AEST
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"What the ***** is with your gangster signs?
Sorry but you look like you're just nine "
AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
Ah, damn. That's some good *****. |
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