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how do you guage lonliness?
Contributed by
emokid
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:08:48 PM in AEST
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How do gauge lonliness?
By how many empty bottlesare on my counter
By how many sleepless nights spent
By how hollow I feel sitting across a beautiful girl
Or perhaps lonliness is gauged by the losses we've had
I lost many women.
My fiance my mother
I lost my father to emotions muted by pain
or maybe just maybe
It is not gauged at all
I've got something for every nothing
It could be a trade
It could be of our own making
Lonliness is but an illness that comes and goes
How long it stays is just
How long we allow it
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emokid
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Re: how do you guage lonliness?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem . cause i also lost someone it was my boyfriend he drowned and i miss him alot. And i know how it is to be lonely ........ great poem i liked it but kind of sad tho,,, keep on writing!^_^ |
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Re: how do you guage lonliness?
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:33:31 AM AEST
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sad, yes, but oh so true. great honesty and emotion, i rilly like this. i too have lost a best frend, lukemia... lonliness does come and go... wow what a great way to put it. i rilly like this piece, keep it up.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: how do you guage lonliness?
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by BEE on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:25:44 AM AEST
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VERY NICE LOVED HOW IT WENT
PS GET AT SOME OF MINE
BEE |
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