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Promise for Tomorrow
Contributed by
SLiM_eLviS
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:41:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Red suns that make your shadow mine
They will show me your profile
And I, a figure in the shadows
Will contemplate your aspect from a ‘far
For me, I am sunk in tenebrous skies
They fathom no light
But I, from the eminent heights of the stars
Will love you clandestinely
Leaving no element
Of I, and this outlawed love
Tomorrow I will part from you
But still I’ll be intimately attendant
Like the midnight loving azure
That creeps into your room at night
Avowal of mine:
My heart will string along
The path that you may walk
Secretive in step
But I
From the crepuscule will gaze
Like the owl that sings to the moon
At your alluring guise
And in this darkness I will remain
To love you in its nostalgia
So that you may never cease life
And never be in need of love
In this way I love you
In this way I will die
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SLiM_eLviS
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2005-05-12 21:41:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Promise for Tomorrow
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aquaelius on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:53:06 AM AEST (User
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Honestly I have no friggin clue what words like: tenebrous or crepuscule mean, but they sound so nice in your poem... almost cannonish. Thanks for sharing.
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