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My Dearest Love
Contributed by
greeneyes
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:27:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My dearest love
How do I find the words
Words that are hard for me to say
My time with you is running out
I've known for a short time now
All tests are confirmed
I needed time alone with God to become strong
So when you look into my eyes
Pain and hurt is not what I want you to see
But the love we have shared over our years together
My life with you is like no other
You are my lover, your my best friend
My dearest love
Promise me you won't stay alone
Find someone to share your love with
A part of me will be sealed away inside your heart
I won't be greedy and take it all
In little ways I'll let you know I'm thinking of you
Hold me close and don't let go
Just closing my eyes
I'm very tired
For you are my lover your my best friend
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greeneyes
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Re: My Dearest Love
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by twisted_dreams on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:28:36 PM AEST
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good write.. very inspiring. keep it up!
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Re: My Dearest Love
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:54:13 PM AEST
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A very emotional write.
Brings tears to my eyes.
Very touching
The Voice
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Re: My Dearest Love
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:54:45 AM AEST
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nancy this is very beautifully written and sooo moving... hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: My Dearest Love
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by venkat on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:04:57 AM AEST
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| Lovely write..beautifully touching...:-)venkat |
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Re: My Dearest Love
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:14:13 AM AEST
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This is an outstanding piece of poetry filled with alot of emotion. This brought tears to my eyes. I can feel the pain and suffering behind the lines. You touched me deeply with this write.
*hugs*
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Re: My Dearest Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:40:39 PM AEST
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so very sad Nancy a very moving piece
Michelle
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