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A man and his sister

Contributed by miss_erika on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:55:40 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

A man and his sister.

a man and his sister
they said it happend at the park
only noises that they herd
in the evening to see it was to dark.

The police man and the detective
are trying to solve the case
The answers are clearly written
invisbile on the victims face.

The man and his sister nervous to the bone
try to answer the detectives question
with out a tremble in their tone.

Hidden cameras in the benches and trees
the crime has been taped
it proves that she has been beaten
and then she had been raped.
You could hear theyre voices
and when she had been hit
but you couldnt see anything really
no one knows who did it.

The bruises around her neck
match up to the mans hand
the shoes that he is wearing
match up to the footprints on the land.

They found a lock of the sisters hair
on the victims shirt
and a thread from the hole
from when she ripped her skirt.

the police man stated
"sir your starting to sweat
are you going to be alright?"
"i need to know where you where
when all of this happend last night."

"we were trying to sleep" the sister said
"until we herd a terrible kind of noise
it was her yelling for help, shrieking in her voice."
"thats when we herd the gunshot..."

The police man very suspicous said
"there wasnt a gun shot wound"
"they left her there slowly dying"
he slapped the handcuffs on them
"..Your not very good at lying."

Copyright © miss_erika ... [ 2005-05-12 18:55:40]
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Re: A man and his sister (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:11:47 PM AEST
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I honor this piece in all its 'corny-ness' from the authors preface and the twisted macabre subject that seemingly defies a rhyme flow but you stayed true to the story.

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien

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