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why
Contributed by
bubble08
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:23:41 PM in AEST
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PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!
Why?
who do you pretend
to be someone your not
why
why do you do it to impress him
hes just a guy
why do you drink and smoke
its not you
and you know it
you just do it to feel cool
why
why do you always blame it on other people
you say he got you started on it. NO!
you made a choice
why do you lie
its not you
i hate the person your trying to be
why do you always run away from your problems
you say this is you
but deep down you know its not
you know what
im tired of this
keep on doing what your doing
with your lies, excuses, smoking and drinking
and see how many people you have in you life after
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Re: why
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by Zeldianus on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:32:52 PM AEST
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| this is very nice. whoever this is to should really take a second look at what they are doing and who they are becoming. keep up the good work |
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Re: why
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:39:53 PM AEST
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I'm sorry about the things with your sister I hope soon she realises and I'm glad you realise it and I hope when you're older or even now, that you don't follow in those footsteps, atleast the bad parts of them. Great write :)
--amanda-- |
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