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My World
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:54:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We wanted to have a good time
I should have tried to stop you
I could have prevented what you were about to do
My heart can no longer take the pain
My world just seems to be falling apart
I close my eyes and begin to scream
My perfect world is now gone
How will I ever go on
I used to be strong
Now everything is going wrong
I never thought I die alone
Your life is now gone
Our bond as friends is now broken
Copyright ©
jmpy84
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2005-05-12 16:54:56]
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Re: My World
(User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:40:11 AM AEST
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Josh this so sad and heart breaking. Expressed so deep and from the heart. I'm so sorry u r hurting my friend. U need me pm ok. Always here 4 u. It's not ur fault. Hang tuff.
May ur heart heal very soon. Take care.
Hundreds of heartfelt hugs 4 u,
~sue~ |
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Re: My World
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by BEE on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:26:26 AM AEST
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VERY NICE LOVED HOW IT WENT
PS GET AT SOME OF MINE
BEE |
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