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For You
Contributed by
Northernrick
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:49:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want to hold u...
protect u from all that I have done,
show u how I can change them
before you run.....
Everyday I regret things I do.....
stuff went wrong, involving you
I talk to much,
I don’t make sense
my words always come out wrong,
I wish u new
What I really meant to say to you......
Everyday I regret things I do......
Stuff went wrong, involving you
Im not fine, its not ok
I try to change everyday
Its all for you.....
I still screw up,
what else do u want me to do...........
You mean so much that I really care
I sweat, I bleed
I cut, I cry
I want to change,
that’s no lie
Everyday I regret things I do.........
I’ve changed just for you
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Northernrick
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2005-05-12 16:49:00]
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Re: For You
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:45:39 PM AEST
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| nice poem i liked it its sumthing i can relate too i tried not to cut so my bf would love me more |
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Re: For You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:06:13 PM AEST
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Very Nice write..
Search heart your words will follow..
Changes are good but,
Never lose sight of who you are..
...Wishing you the best
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: For You
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by girltranscended on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:20:48 PM AEST
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| "stuff went wrong, involving you" is a really great line! |
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Re: For You
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:07:25 AM AEST
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This was a very deep write I really enjoyed it.
"I sweat, I bleed
I cut, I cry
I want to change,
that’s no lie"
For some reason I really enjoyed that part.
Great poem as usual, keep it up :)
xoxo
--amanda-- |
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