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Rage
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:33:36 PM in AEST
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Tortured mind, a war there rages
good and bad in force engages
damn the reasons, fight the fight
steal the silence of the night
scream and kill and run them through
break the bonds of blood in two
for no more than foolish pride
pick a king and choose your side
Smell the powder from the guns
see the good sense as it runs
far away, a cowards act
plead for truce, a Satan's pact
break the back and gouge the eye
hear the spirits as they cry
bribe for peace with stolen gold
while the flags of hate unfold.
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Rage
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:54:06 PM AEST
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I can see where your coming from.
awsome write on this once again.
thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Rage
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:15:15 PM AEST
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I believe war to always be "a Satan's pact."
It never brings peace. War only brings domination and more hatred.
Great piece, Larry,
Rita
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Re: Rage
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:16:11 PM AEST
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Great flow!!! I have to admit tho, I prefer your romantic writes...... This is good none the less...
Jenni |
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Re: Rage
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:38:04 PM AEST
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Yes the ones that are romantic are sublime. Although you did a wonderful job writing this.
Fantastic
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Rage
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:57:19 PM AEST
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Hmmm is this about war? or every day life?
I have a feeling its the latter.
Well crafted sir!! |
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Re: Rage
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:44:08 PM AEST
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Makes a damned good amount of sense to me. Very well written, it does indeed feel this way sometimes.
*toasts with mead-horn*
Andrew |
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Re: Rage
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 01:59:03 PM AEST
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Even if this is a little hard to understand, its still another amazing piece and the rhythmn is perfect, Just awesomely dark..
~Clark |
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Re: Rage
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:51:31 AM AEST
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This was awesome Larry I love how
whatever subject you write about it turns out
equally good. The first two lines of the
second stanza just blew me away. A very
intense write here.
Bobo (Joel) |
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