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BLAINE MCDOWELL
Contributed by
tblainem
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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From the beginning inJuly 2 1988
Under a blanket I spent part of my life
Cradles and swings were at the beginning of my life
Kansas winds blew me alot of places
You couldn't even begin to imagine what I've been through
Over the river and through the woods
Under the barns I go
Before I died I lived a good life
Running from enemies
And embracing friends
Not so much of my life was sad
David my uncle bought me my fist car
Old oldsmobile it was
Nice gesture it was it truly was
To be alive was good
O so good
O so great
To be alive was the best thing ever
However now I miss life so
A life so great not just so so
Kites filled my life with joy
Everday I flied them
Racing my kids to the park just to fly them
Copyright ©
tblainem
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2005-05-12 16:20:32]
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Re: BLAINE MCDOWELL
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:48:35 AM AEST
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You confused me a bit with your poem. It's definately an interesting piece of poetry to read. Otherwise well done.
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Sue |
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Re: BLAINE MCDOWELL
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by MisTaraReunite on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:58:31 AM AEST
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| Very soothing, nice rhythm, good piece:) |
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