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goodbye
Contributed by
sweetnsilentsoul
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:33:55 PM in AEST
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when i close my eyes
i dream
when i sllep at night
i dream
when i stare off in to space
i dream
i dream of a world so peaceful and wise
noone who screams at you or fills you with lies
i dream of a place like none other
where i can be free and spend time with my mother
a place where acceptance is not hard to find
a place where you can let all your thoughts unwind
unwind in to miracles
unwind in to glory
where all of your scars and cuts tell a story
a story worth telling
a story to hear
theats the the place i dream to hold near
but lifes reality and when i awake
the harder the breaths get to take
with every step and every move
is just one more way for me to prove
that whats the point in living if ur not really living at all so now all thats left to do is just fall fall away from this awful place
so i can forget all the memories not erased
when im gone i know you wont wonder why
but for the record here is my last goodbye
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sweetnsilentsoul
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2005-05-12 15:33:55]
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Re: goodbye
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:37:59 PM AEST
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| i think the poem was Really good, you rhymed effortlessly, and it flowed so well! but i think you should reconsider that last goodbye, becuase if it is you miss out on the good part of life, trust me. cant have the rainbow without the rian, right? stick in there. love the poem! |
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Re: goodbye
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:38:06 PM AEST
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| i think the poem was Really good, you rhymed effortlessly, and it flowed so well! but i think you should reconsider that last goodbye, becuase if it is you miss out on the good part of life, trust me. cant have the rainbow without the rian, right? stick in there. love the poem! |
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Re: goodbye
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:25:05 AM AEST
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welcome to YPDC if no where elas then this can be your dream world, this pome was really good and it had alot of heart felt emotin in it I to feel this way about life, but it dosnt always stay that way (trust me.) this was a very good poem and I too hope that this is not your last goodbye. all that aside I think this pooem should have been posted under suicide or dark poetry
(but thats just me.) Be well. |
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Re: goodbye
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:33:13 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPCD..I think this poem is really great and it rhymed so well,sleep isnt easy for me to come by so i dont dream to much. I have problems going to sleep at night. and i dont even nap .. its just i get so much on my mind at night that it keeps me up, its when i do most of my thinking ,, Anyways love the poem, Keep writing.
hugsssssss butterflygirl40 |
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