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Walls and Changes
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:03:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm not spontaneous
I really hate change
I like my life static
hate to rearrange
With change comes unease
opens the door to fear
I get real edgy
when change is so near
My vision's nearsighted
I can't see far at all
my embracing the future
has come to a stall
These four walls surround me
my home's a safe haven
can sit in messed clothes
my face ain't clean shaven
I'm looking for work
and updating my blog
poetry comes out
rewrite my prologue
These four walls are sturdy
they keep out my brother
but things are too tight
my breath they do smother
Looking out the window
and nothing is near
Has life passed me by
I'm alone I do fear
Despair sinks its teeth
in my wrinkly old skin
Hope fades away
I know I can't win
These walls are a prison
they have suppressed my fight
the tears roll unchecked
in the emptiness of night
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-05-12 12:03:28]
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Re: Walls and Changes
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:43:16 PM AEST
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Interesting poem
So full of emotion
Imaginative and thought provoking
I can relate to the message
Great Write
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Re: Walls and Changes
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by chefhmboyrd on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:29:46 PM AEST
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| well written i love the imagery the only constant is change, and when you reject it you reject life |
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Re: Walls and Changes
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:56:27 PM AEST
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I really loved the flow in this..... As for the content..well let me just say this...I used to be the same way....until I was thrown into a position of responsiblity.... Now..my fear of change has disappeared...maybe not completely, but I no longer dread it...
(You should read my poems Called "Fear" and "Faced With A Mountain"
Thank you..
Jenni |
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Re: Walls and Changes
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by mylady on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:32:46 AM AEST
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I enjoy read this peom . you will never be alone there alway some one for every one.
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Re: Walls and Changes
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:37:16 AM AEST
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i think this is possibly my favorite write by you. i can totally relate and it is brilliantly written. amazing, i luv it. please write more!
jennie* |
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