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Untrue
Contributed by
Rogue
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:28:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Which 2 u is being untrue
Sneaking behind your mom's babk 2 be with yo boo
The one u loved not actin like the one u knew
Or the one u gave it up to mentionin u as "Who"
Which 2 u is being untrue
Being hit by yo man
or yo friends callin u a "Fool"
Being used as a tool so your
"Boyfriend" and so-called "Friends"
can become what they call cool
Being popular is not a need
but something most people seek and heed
The reason they plead,
the reason they smoke weed,
why some deny their seed
If your friends don't like u 4 u
then u know something is wrong or untrue
So the next time u feel like a fool
Think about the situation
and if it was untrue 2 u
Copyright ©
Rogue
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2005-05-12 11:28:46]
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Re: Untrue
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by poet70 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:51:31 PM AEST
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Rogue, this almost read like a rap song and not a poem, but hey that was cool, I was with you in that, I liked it, just don't make the next ones to difficult for us to follow, oK? lol, other wise you will have a bunch of lost folks out here trying to figure out your poems,. but other then that, you did a great job, and I can only say RIGHT ON! I was with ya in ya writings. And don't quite now, keep it up.
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Re: Untrue
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:33:49 PM AEST
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| i liked this think that some young people sholud read this i know fom experence all oyu say is true good job |
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