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Smells Like Suicide
Contributed by
Vermilion
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Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:53:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Hanging, swinging back and fourth
Suffocating in the empty source
I don’t want the help you’ll give
To fix my head, don’t want to live
It’s my choice
To sound my voice
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore
The end is near without the breathing
Rid me of the falling feeling
I just want the Other Side
Smells a lot like suicide
It’s my decision
End the division
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore
Dry your eyes, please don’t cry
Give forgiveness one last try
Soul mate, we will never truly end
Give in to wherever we will descend
It’s my choice
To stop my voice
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore
Jesus condescending me
His decision to ever let me be free
I have no place to wait and hide
Oh, this smells a lot like suicide
Smells like suicide
Smells like suicide
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Vermilion
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Re: Smells Like Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:18:03 AM AEST
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Dang..awesome write..
I am not much on Suicide Poems,
Just as you don't know why you wrote this,
I don't know what to say....May "God Bless You"
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Smells Like Suicide
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:02:17 PM AEST
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I loved this.. It had a song lyric tune to me.. I like poems about suicide.. I liked this.. great write...
christina |
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Re: Smells Like Suicide
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by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 07:59:07 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this write. it was artfully worded and original. as already commented it has the rythm of lyrics to it, the repitition of smells like suicide helped that take form a lot. When I read the title i thought, "Smells like children" (marilyn manson) and "Smells like teen spirit" (nirvana) so i was automatically interested, the write was definately worthy of the title. By the way if your username is in anyway related to the nine greatest musicians on the whole f***ing planet (SLIPKNOT) then amen to that!
~your name is etched in my arm as subtly as the knife in my back~weepingprophet |
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