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Desire

Contributed by kareless on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:34:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I can't keep fighting you like this.
There's something you & I seem to miss.

I hate it so much, when at each other we yell,
because none of it is the reason in love with you I fell.

I do beleive that you try to do what I ask,
& I am certain some of which isn't an easy task.

Still, sometimes I feel like a rat in a maze,
& I shouldn't because it is only the very first phase.

You know I need to hear you tell me all of what's on your mind,
& often the ways I try to get you to talk isn't always kind.

I need your support.
I need you to be with me on this, not against.
When you are I feel trapt in a yard,
held down, closed up & fenced.

I have a never ending fear of losing those to which I care,
'cause I've lost so many & each time it's just as unfair.

You remember how it was when I first arrived,
that was because love & security I was deprived.

The Real reason I ever let you in,
was because I beleived you could help me defeat this feeling,
& together we could win.

The question now still remains,...

Do we figure out together what it is that we really desire?
Or do we let our enraged sweat & painful tears put out the fire?

Copyright © kareless ... [ 2005-05-12 01:34:15]
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Re: Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 01:47:37 AM AEST
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That has as much heart as it does questions!
It's a poem filled with passion,& filled with pain,what next will happen,love or pain?! You wrote this so brillantly,I mean - it goes from high to low & back over again,as if it was to never end!!! It sounds like you want it to last forever,but do you have the communications to stay together!!!! A very well written poem,& I wish the both of you the best of luck-& GOD BLESS BOTH OF YOU!!!!! (A 5 *****)

DAN!!!!!!

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